Friday, September 7, 2012

My friend s Love


     55 words:limited edition fiction

The woodland shoe landed with a thud in the Capitol hill gained all attention.The table was organized with her sitting beside a handsome man;her new boyfriend.I looked into her eyes.It had tears with a smile.”Meet Manish”,She said looking at the shrimps which he  must have ordered.”I am going to marry him”,She said again now looking at the glass of wine.I was startled and overjoyed;my destiny,my love,I thought.But,Alas,she holds his hand.What happened?
His name was also Manish.  
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24 comments:

  1. amit gangulySeptember 7, 2012 at 11:50 AM

    Its a good way to end with a melancholy. Interesting post indeed.

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  2. The PoetSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:03 PM

    Hello Gunjan.
    I bet they were bittersweet tears too, because she's not marrying the one she truly loves. Very intriguing tale indeed. Hope you will tell us more. Thanks for sharing.

    This Plunderous World

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 7, 2012 at 8:18 PM

      Thanks a lot for reading Andy.Its great you liked it.

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  3. AmitAagSeptember 7, 2012 at 10:23 PM

    How dramatic! A wonderful F-55 Gunjan:)

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:48 AM

      Thanks Amit sir.This is my first 55 word fiction and thanks you liked it.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 7, 2012 at 10:28 PM

    very critical and satirical of happenings of life !

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:49 AM

      yes,true.And thanks for your comments.This is my first 55 word fiction and thanks you all liked it.

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  5. The Indian Sales GuySeptember 7, 2012 at 11:17 PM

    Too good....:)

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 8, 2012 at 4:50 AM

      Thanks a lot Ashish and keep visiting.Once again,welcome to my blog.

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  6. magiceyeSeptember 8, 2012 at 7:23 AM

    Mistaken identity ;)

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  7. Anu ~*~September 8, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    Really good one gunjan ........

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  8. UnknownSeptember 8, 2012 at 11:36 PM

    Two Manish..! LOL
    Poor situation and a lovely twist :)

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  9. Jen..The Butterfly EffectSeptember 9, 2012 at 12:42 AM

    AWWW!!! I actually have a friend like that! Her current and ex bf share the same name! Too bad huh!!

    Nicely written! :)

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 9, 2012 at 2:45 AM

      Thanks,,,it creates a funny situation sometimes.

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  10. JerlySeptember 9, 2012 at 4:13 AM

    well u really created a story in those few words. the title was eye catching as well :)

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:22 PM

      thanks Jerly for your kind words.And welcome to my blog . :)

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  11. TTTSeptember 9, 2012 at 4:15 AM

    wonderful ! life is like that !

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    1. gunjan kumarSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:30 PM

      Thanks TTT,
      Yes,life is often wicked and funny like this.

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  12. Anjali SainiSeptember 13, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Very nice Gunjan.. Your first one came up very well. Interesting! :)

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